This is my best writing sample that I have done. I really made sure to take heed of all the comments my language examiner made after he saw my draft. I feel like I was able to use longer sentances and challenged myself. Although I hope that now, at the end of my third semester I can write pieces that are even longer, I felt very proud that I could come up with that much to say in a coherent manner. I did not jump around and I feel like I transitioned well. I also used a culturally appropriate greeting that my examiner said demonstrates my awareness of Arabic culture.
